Body & Heart

Body & Heart

LadyRed's picture



I feel your nails
Dig into my skin
I gasp out loud
My resistance is thin

I've wanted you
For so damn long
That I can't continue
To act strong

Take me to bed
And have your way
Don't let go
Until the light of day

I give you my body
I give you my heart
Please don't ever
Tear it apart.

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metalfoot's picture

Lady Red knows what she wants!

That last stanza is powerful... the recognition of the power of passion and not wanting it to be a force for pain and sorrow.

cts's picture

I rather flinched at the first stanza. It comes out the gate rather brutal and then relegates to something a bit more vulnerable.