LadyRed's picture



I lie in bed
Not wanting to sleep
I have nightmares
That seem too real

But then you appear
And lay down beside me
Taking my hand
And kissing my cheek

You do not move
All the night long
And your breathing soothes
And lulls me to dreams

In the morning, you're gone
But I am awake
And the dark dreams
Have faded to black.

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metalfoot's picture

Hooray for the power of love to soothe a wounded soul.

Adnama17's picture

Absolutely beautiful. Love the transition from nightmares to dreams. And there is no such thing as true absence if you ask me. Energy, especially intimately connected energy like this, is eternal and transcendental. Nicely done. <3