LadyRed's picture



Place your body
On my body
Keep me still
Hold me down

Trace your fingers
And your lips
On my skin
And memorize it

Touch me
And feel me
As though I'm a language
You want to learn

Smell me
And taste me
Like I am food
And you are starved,

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metalfoot's picture

I am constantly impressed by the ability to evoke without needing to use explicit terminology.

Donna Devine's picture

Lovely. Evocative and sensuous, yet remains refined.
Good work. Smile