Too Much (demo at 44496)

Too Much (demo at 44496)

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Liner Notes: 

Written to punk music in my head but open to any style you hear

ANDY did a demo at:

http://fiftyninety.fawmers.org/song/44496

Lyrics: 

Too Much

V1
I tasted you
and then
I craved some more
your sweetness
was so tempting

I swallowed you
and then
I ate you up
your richness
was inviting

C
but one slice
was more than
enough of you
oh one slice
was way too much

yeah one slice
was more than
enough....
one slice
was too... too much

V2
I believed you
and then
I saw your truth
your contents
were unhealthy

I trusted you
and then
I found poison
your spices
were quite deadly

C
and one slice
was more than
enough of you
one slice
was way too much

yeah one slice
was more than
enough....
one slice
was too....too much

B
sugar coating
seductive flavors
once lured me in

non nutritious
toxic ingredients
made it all end

now I know better
and I won’t be fooled
no I won’t be fooled again.....

C
and one slice
was more than
enough of you
one slice
was way too much

yeah one slice
was more than
enough....
one slice
was too....too much

OUTRO
you left me
feeling
left me
feeling
left me
feeling
sick



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Comments

cindyrella's picture

This of course can be seen in more than one way, which makes it so compelling. I can kind of hear that punk too and I hope someone will pick this up. Nice!

tjeff's picture

Love the "one slice was too much" metaphor, this lyric would work well in many styles. I like it.