Sidetracked

Sidetracked

AlyssaPascal's picture

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Lyrics: 

this weather’s got me sidetracked,
now I’m struggling to get back
seldom does the rain fall
in the wasteland that’s my mind
guess i’m losing it, but i feel fine

it’s like i’m stuck inside an earthquake
watching my hands shake
all this loneliness and heartbreak
did i make a mistake?
all this heartbreak
did i make a mistake?

this weather’s got me in a landslide
shaking up my insides
as i tumble down this incline;
I feel the rain-soaked ground
around me sliding separately

it’s like i’m caught in an earthquake
watching my hands shake
from loneliness and heartbreak
did i make a mistake?
all this heartbreak
did i make a mistake?



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Comments

jeustan's picture

Super cool guitar layering. The vocal melodies slide right in there, too. Structurally solid.

coolparadiso's picture

Yeah good guitars and they keep the pace up to the vocal well. Nice

billwhite51's picture

i like the fast parts the best. guitrs sounnd great and i like your vocal delivery too. my favorite lyric is "this weather’s got me in a landslide / shaking up my insides / as i tumble down this incline;

ductapeguy's picture

You had me from the first guitar growl. The clean-detached vocals amplify the pathos of the song. And when the guitars kick, it is like a wall of sound.