Magical Waves of Thought

Magical Waves of Thought

Sunfire's picture

Liner Notes: 

Not sure what kind of music would really bring this to life but something ethereal, out of this world, and dreamy comes to my mind.
Thoughts and comments welcome.

Lyrics: 

Magical Waves of Thought

Transition to dark
I'm like star trek
A visual astronaut
On cruise controls deck
Aroused by feelings
Released in sleep
Images beam to mind
With the secrets I keep

Magical waves of thought in the night
Take off like a rocket toward stars in sight
Racing at the speed of dreams
Breaking barriers in these streams
That flow like a river across a void
Fragmented sequences suggestive of Freud
Where science fiction and sex seem to mix
In abstract subconscious fermented in tricks

A shadow of one
Figure unknown
Orbits the rings of Saturn
To where I have flown
Sensual whispers
Voice asking me
To remove what I wear
In this space so I'm free

Magical waves of thought in the night
Take off like a rocket toward stars in sight
Racing at the speed of dreams
Breaking barriers in these streams
That flow like a river across a void
Fragmented sequences suggestive of Freud
Where science fiction and sex seem to mix
In abstract subconscious fermented in tricks

All is not as it may appear to be
Below the surface of my memory

Magical waves of thought in the night
Take off like a rocket toward stars in sight
Racing at the speed of dreams
Breaking barriers in these streams
That flow like a river across a void
Fragmented sequences suggestive of Freud
Where science fiction and sex seem to mix
In abstract subconscious fermented in tricks



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Comments

RalphCarl's picture

"Racing at the speed of dreams" is a brilliant image. Good writing

billwhite51's picture

if i had written this, i would probably drop the verses and use only the chorus, not that the verses are less well written than the chorus, but they are so specfic in content that you lose the etherial dreaminess of the chorus. also, the verses suffer from the specific point of view, while the chorus is universal. the first verse in artcular strikes me as your inspiration for the song, not the song itself, as if you are eplaining what is to follow, while i feel this confines the eperience to a limited point of view. i hear the song as something along the lines of the spiritualized album Ladies and Gentlemen We Are Floating in Space.

wacha's picture

Very thought provoking lyrics here, I love the lines "That flow like a river across a void / Fragmented sequences suggestive of Freud"

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful, magical lyrics. Hope there will be music. Please keep me posted.
Nadia
Thank you for your kind comment on The Waves of Life. Interesting how we both thought about the waves Smile