Because You're with Me

Because You're with Me

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Liner Notes: 

Needs music, of course.

Holler if you're interested.

Thanks!

--Doug

Lyrics: 

Because You’re with Me

My heart’s a rose that blooms
When I smell your sweet perfume
I’ll stay here in this room
Because you’re with me

The rain comes down in sheets
Your songs play on repeat
And my life feels complete
Because you’re with me

Do my eyes tell the truth?
It should be plain to see
Do you feel
When we kiss
What you mean to me?

The cars go swooshing by
The sun breaks through the sky
And I could almost cry
Because you’re with me

Do my eyes tell the truth?
It should be plain to see
Do you feel
When we kiss
What you mean to me?

(Instrumental)

The cars go swooshing by
The sun breaks through the sky
And I could almost cry
Because you’re with me

Do my eyes tell the truth?
It should be plain to see
Do you feel
When we kiss
What you mean to me?
(2X)

My life feels complete
Because you’re with me



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Comments

Edward 9th Street's picture

Simple and relatable. Musical lines and good flow. Nice job, Doug.

Amanda Rose Riley's picture

Great simple love song lyric! Even though the rhymes and imagery are simple, I see a lot of originality in it and it does paint a picture of the moment.