Arson

Arson

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Liner Notes: 

A little late on week 4 (and still working weeks 3 and 5).

Lyrics: 

Arson
(c) 2020 Deanna Sweidel

Set me on fire
Feed my desire

A moth to a flame
That sure is your game

My eyes filled with smoke
Can’t see through your cloak

Light this inferno
You’ll burn me I know
Light this inferno
You’ll burn me I know

Leave me in ashes
Just dust in your path

Thick soot I can’t breathe
As I watch you leave

Your brand of seduction
Is Arson’s destruction

Light this inferno
You’ll burn me I know
Light this inferno
You’ll burn me I know
Oh Light this inferno
You’ll burn me I know



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

A lot of flame going on here! I like the extended metaphor though the rhymes in verse 2 could maybe use a little sharpening?