I Won't I Will

I Won't I Will

Zeekle's picture



Liner Notes: 

My take on the prompt I wont I will... A quick write so the words I actually wrote don't appear to match what I actually sung... oh well.


I wont, I will

I won’t I can’t I will I am
Never stand in my way
I won’t I can’t I will I am
I am here to stay
So don’t say won’t
Cos I will I am today

See the wall, Say I can’t
I’ll tear it down I’ll have may rant
What you gonna do
Falling down I’ll get back up
Standing tall I’ll fill my cup
See if I don’t do

There’s a way so don’t you say
It’s to tough, it’s to rough
What you gonna do
Success is mine so stand in line
I’ll not wait it’s my fate
See if I dont do

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


coolparadiso's picture

Nice angryish lyric, nice full guitar sound. Good skirmish

musicsongwriter's picture

Nice take on a skirmish prompt. I like your vocals and guitar.

cindyrella's picture

Wow, that guitar is a perfect match for your words. Nice!

JWHanberry's picture

Well done. The lyrics are sufficiently ambiguous so that we can insert our own dilemmas into it. Good sounds.

barbara's picture

I really like your chorus here. It’s very confident and catchy and has that challenge factor of making me want to learn to sing along and keep up. A ton of determination in those verses!

dzd's picture

Agree with JW on this lyrically, and that's a really groovy vocal melody, great little bluesy lick/rhythm awesome guitar work the vocal fits this nicely
great tune!