Snake in the grass (skirmish)
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Liner Notes:
This was a 'skirmish' where you have one hour, more or less, to write and record something to a specific title or prompt- in this case it was a title- 'snake in the grass'. I , of course, started thinking about the political meanings, applied not just to the US politics of the moment but more generally, perhaps. This kind of wrote itself, based musically on a minor-key descending bassline kind of bluesy thing. I'm kind of happy with the bridge, which was musically semi-improvised and sort of came together.. I was wondering, how do I get back to the V !
Recorded quick to the iPhone using music memos (which adds some rudimentary drums if you want) and then quickly mastered in audacity. One take, guitar and vocal together.
Lyrics:
There’s a snake in the grass, his name is fear
Slithering slowly, making reason disappear
Moving surreptitiously like poison gas
There’s a snake, a snake in the grass
look carefully/ you can see/snake in the grass
There’s a snake in the grass, called nationalism
Displaying his flag like a shiny prism
Raising jingoistic slogans to a critical mass
There’s a snake, a snake in the grass
look carefully/ you can see/snake in the grass
There’s a snake in the grass, called ‘blame the refugee’
With dog whistles of racism and bigotry
Columbus was his hero in history class
There’s a snake, a snake in the grass
look carefully/ you can see/snake in the grass
Snakes arrive on the wings of apathy/covered in crosses and fake Christianity
But every religions value of humanity/knows that snake is just a profanity
There’s a snake in the grass, stirring up discontent
With the fable we can all be in that one percent
Saying why should I pay taxes, I need a free pass
There’s a snake, a snake in the grass
look carefully/ you can see/snake in the grass
There’s a snake in the grass, with an orange complexion
With the fascists of old he’s got a connection
Down in the dirt, near the underpass
There’s a snake, a snake in the grass
look carefully/ you can see/snake in the grass
(c) M. Skliar 2020
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Comments
Moving surreptitiously like poison gas....such a great line...and the delivery just sounds snake-like
really well done! I like the bridge too
sometimes the best come back-to's are the ones that come from nowhere haha
Wow, very good. Such a lot of lyrics in such a short time for writing. I was wondering if you would do something political and you certainly did! Prism and nationalism is a very good rhyme. Good writing.
That's a lot there for a skirmish! Nice rhymes and rhyme scheme, flows naturally but not predictably. I like the line about the 1% being available to, oh, I don't know, the hard core 30%?
This is such an amazing skirmish!!! I love the pointed political direction you took the prompt! So perfect! And great energy in the music and delivery! You are such a brilliant songwriter!
What a killer opening line! These lyrics are fantastic, and the music has great energy. Wonderful skirmishing!
Well performed good sounding song. I think you covered most of the bases.
Great lyrics and the music is really catchy. You've said it all, Mike Bravo bravo!
Good rhythm in both the guitar and the vocal. I like your vocal delivery on this one, Mike. Of course, I had a feeling which way you'd go with this, although I didn't nail it spot on. Good skirmish!
Oh wow! What an amazing idea and song! Truth all the way through and so incredible!
Damn, that's pretty f***ing awesome! So catchy! That bassline line sounds like a snake charmer. Apropos as that's seems to be what's happened. Think for yourselves already! A definite keeper I think.
Gorgeous song Mike. It draws the listener right in. Hypnotic! If anyone says to me that it is impossible to create a fantastic song in one hour I know what song to show to them! Fantastic work for sure!
Nadia
Those are some awesome rhymes! And the groove is, well, snaky.
You mentioned Samson and Delilah when you commented on my song - check out Chris Thile doing Samson on mando:
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=KxXKP3j0PmU
This definitely has an all-at-once hook to it. There's a quite a bit of ideology to unpack, but you've inserted it with so much bounce and precision. Pretty dope, my man! Like that finish, too!