LadyRed's picture



I need your body
Next to mine
To sleep at night
And just feel fine

Your heartbeat soothes
Your touch is soft
And all that holds
My soul aloft

So lay with me
Till the morning light
And promise me
This will all be all right.

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Edward 9th Street's picture

Anyone who has grown accustomed to sleeping with another knows, there's a lot of truth expressed here, So concise, love the title, nice job.

IA's picture

Simple and powerful.

It's those things that only get messed up when you start trying to describe it. You either know it or don't.

This is a perfect piece of art.