Such A Thirst For You

Such A Thirst For You

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Post date: 

07/12/2020 - 06:29
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Liner Notes: 

SS071220P
200712

host wacha
prompt Such a thirst

This was a tough one. I gave up at about an hour then decided the chorus was ok. Verse I had was crap so you'll never hear it.

This is 11/4 divided 3+2+3+3.

Guitars: 2004 Martin DCME

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Note: Skirmish: 1 hour to write and record

Lyrics: 

Such A Thirst For You

Ch
Got such a thirst for you
Can't quench it
Wanna drench it
What am I to do
With my craving
It's depraved
Help me now I'm cursed
I got such a thirst.

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Comments

winnerdzd - 2 years 10 months

dzd's picture

Oh come on! share the crap too! hahaha

really enjoyed this...lyrics fit your funky timing really well.

kahlo2013's picture

This is great! I like the short lyric with a strong relatable message. Wonderful guitar and delivery!

Donatedwinnertjeff - 2 years 10 months

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Cool groove, the odd meter almost doesn't come across as being odd meter - flows very well. Good write.

Adnama17's picture

So... The last few days I've noticed you always seem to write in an odd meter. Nothing wrong with that of course, and maybe I've missed anything you've done in a standard meter, so just wondering how you sound straight. Not a criticism, just a pondering. <3

Scubed's picture

I love what you’ve done with that odd meter! And that chorus is very cool. Great skirmishing!

Donatedwacha - 2 years 10 months

wacha's picture

Short but good, It's catchy and leaves me wanting some more. Good skirmish!