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Liner Notes: 

Hehe. I had no idea how this was going to happen. This is not the style I usually write. This just kind of...happened.

From the Softer World challenge, based on this comic:


Do you love me?
Do you love war?
Do you know me?
Just the score.
Do you lift me
or lay me on the floor?
This is sacred
Love War.


You keeping the score?
Does your mind move the way it did before?
Liminal lovewar.

Won't be like it was before
Before the lovewar
Keeping score goes different in the lovewar
Take more, take more.

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


sam sorrow's picture

it's kinda fun when stuff just happens musically. this is interesting and really quite hypnotic. liminal lovewar is an interesting concept to wrap my head around. cool song.

cts's picture

Sold. You very much captured Bjork's vibe/sound with this one. I really, REALLY am impressed by what you've done here. I agree this is a drive down a different road for you, but what a discovery! Again - incredible work here.

billwhite51's picture

the music sounds like a basketball game. the fast rhythm the players and the blips the shots, then the vocal comes in and i imagine a bunch of drunks at a supper club.that features the owner's bellydancing niece.

Saltyjohn's picture

Fantastic, full marks for doing something completely off the wall. Sounds like it was recorded in a games arcade! Great vocals.

ZsuzsaDoe's picture

Really really cool, wow! (:
Kudos for taking on the challenge and running with it like that

headfirstonly's picture

That fizzing riff pretty much does it all, doesn't it? Grabs the attention immediately.

And I really miss A Softer World. it was one of my favourite webcomics. Often dark, often funny, always thought-provoking.