Too Straight (No room)

Too Straight (No room)

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Liner Notes: 

I turned into a record exec, lord help me. I needed all the layers and my computer is super unhappy about it. In fact, I unfortunately think you can hear my external drive dying in the background. I'm just hoping I can get the data back :/

Anyway, I think I took this theme in a directional route. It doesn't necessarily make sense.

Lyrics: 

Verse 1:
Fly on he says
But I'm out of order
with the border

All these lines are such a mess
Don't represent the way our lives run

Chorus:
And I'm too straight for love to bloom.
I'm driving too straight to make any room.

Verse 2:
There's no room for you
Everything's falling here
This 3-d world
We can't integrate the axis
We need to upgrade our praxis

Chorus:
And I'm too straight for love to bloom.
I'm driving too straight to make any room.



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Comments

Scubed's picture

Very cool music and intriguing lyrics! Really nice work on the skirmish prompt. Smile

coolparadiso's picture

love the horns- has a really ominious feel. nice one

tjeff's picture

Nice arrangement and use of different instruments. I also really like the emotion in your vocal, and in the lyric.

yam655's picture

I hope your data is safe. It's a great song, but the liner notes make it scary!