When you are next to me

When you are next to me

Acousticmaddie's picture

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Liner Notes: 

OK I finally did it .. Its really hard for me to write in a genre I dont really like listening to.
But here we go my third 50/90 and there it is The love song.
Message me if you would like to collab.

Lyrics: 

1,
Hold your breath
For a while
Can you feel
How time stands still
Hold my heart
Make a wish
Our dreams roll
From hill to hill

CH:
I am strong, I am weak
When you are next to me
I am lost, I am found
I am scared but this is me

2,
You must forgive me
All my fears
We seems lost in
heavenly streams
We are fragile
We are strong
We are hunting for
Our new dreams

CH:
I am strong, I am weak
When you are next to me
I am lost, I am found
I am scrared but this is me

Bridge
In this new cloud, on the thinnest ice
I am scared to loose my mind
When I am stand here between heaven and earth
Its to late I am already blind
CH:
I am strong, I am weak
When you are next to me
I am lost, I am found
I am scrared but this is me



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

Love that you are writing love songs. The lyrics are lovely. I like the vulnerability and bit of apprehension that is conveyed about getting lost in love. It perfectly captures that fear on losing control to love. Nice tight chorus. Strong bridge. Wonderfully honest feel.

cts's picture

I have to admit - this is quite touching and revealing on two levels: artistically and personally. I'm glad that you took the leap and moved into a genre that you don't normally occupy. That bridge is powerful!

benjo's picture

Oh WOW very nice

I was shocked when I saw you'd done a love lyric
and yes you should do more,
very strong and meaningful
lots of emotion poured into this
it's bursting with realizm

I TIP MY HAT TO YOU

cindyrella's picture

Gosh, this is so GOOD Maddie. You can write anything-and in such a amazing way. Love it!