The One I Burn For
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Liner Notes:
A quick write up on the commute home tonight
Just a smidge lusty - blame it on a book I'm reading at the moment
It's slow, sultry, long notes with fire at the end
this is one of those times where i've broken all the songwriting rules, free-styled it, no chorus, not too much thinking and just went with it
Lyrics:
The One I Burn For
(c) Christine M Kerr
ALL RIGHTS RESERVED 2019
She is
The one I burn for
Yeah
No one but her
You can draw
Pictures on my arm
But I don't
See you
She's
The one I burn for
Hmmmm
Only her
Smile coyly
All you want
But I don't
See you
Ohhhh - I feel everything she does to me
Ohhhh - I feel her - consuming me
She's
The one I burn for
Even when
I'm all alone
You can buy me
Another martini
You can try
to tempt me all you want
But I
Don’t
See you
You're wasting your time, wasting your time, wasting your time, wasting your time
With this game
Cos I
Only burn
For her
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Comments
Yeah. Good stuff. No chorus needed. The hook gets repeated enough to make it all tie together.
"The one I BURN for" Such an interesting word choice as it is so much more intense. No need for chorus, rules, rhymes. Music is feeling and you capture it with such ease and power! Very good write.
I like how this one circles back, reinforcing the theme. Strong work!