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Liner Notes: 

Sorry about the demo - four other people were using the immediate area, so I had to tweak a lot of the background noise!! I'm also a little shaky in 3/4. Apologies.

Lyrics: 

Nestled in shadow
In meadows for beds
To lay in this world
Is a privileged rest

The grasses which cradle us
Are thousands of threads
But I’d care less, it’s true
If I couldn’t share with you.

Stars hung in amber
White sunset flashes
Quick, make a wish
Like on fallen eyelashes

Watch how the sky turns
in colourful splashes
It’s easy to care
In the moments you’re there.

I turn and I face you
Whole planets would swoon
And history would sing
If we gave it our tune

Heart-tangled duets
In a lone afternoon
I’d be stuck on this view
If I w’n’t next to you.



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Comments

So pretty! Such a warm and inviting sound. Calm and sweet melody. Lovely acoustic solo too. This is great!

billwhite51's picture

with these lyrics and this voice, who notices the background noise? lovely melody as well.

Susan Cantey's picture

Vivid lyric married with an enchanting melody sweetly delivered! Love the shadowy harmony - would have liked more - and guitar solo.

coolparadiso's picture

oh yes. had me from the first note. beautiful song. this is a really good song! beautifully delivered - you did a good job with the background - sounds like waves or a light breeze