Alibi

Alibi

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Liner Notes: 

I'm unable to work out verse lyrics yet. It's the only thing missing. Every time I think I'm getting somewhere, l bomb out. I'm unsure of what perspective to use. Is the singer the false alibi or has the singer found out an alibi was false? I'm sure I will work it out soon.

The music was super long and complicated. I had to use a scythe to get it down to 4 mins. I did want a long fade out for some reason though.

Lyrics: 

Alibi
Music and Lyrics M M Scullion ©2019

(Verse 1)
...
(Pre-Chorus)
A fool is what I am
A fool I'll always be
When I look in the mirror,
Thats what I see
(Chorus)
Your False alibi

(Verse 2)
...
(Pre-Chorus)
A fool is what I am
A fool I'll always be
When I look in the mirror,
That fool is me
(Chorus)
Your False alibi

(Verse 3)
...
(Pre-chorus)
A fool is what I am
A fool I'll always be
When I look in the mirror,
Thats what I see
A fool is what I am
A fool I'll always be
When I look in the mirror,
That fool is me
(Chorus)
Your false alibi



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Comments

kahlo2013's picture

I love this music! Wonderful layers that weave so well together to create energy and intensity. It is a great chorus. It seems that the singer has been fooled by someone else’s false alibi and it seems it probably wasn’t the first time. Great song that you have started here!

sbs2018's picture

What an intriguing song idea in the chorus! The music is quite dramatic. Would love to see this come together. Great start!

phoenixash's picture

It's super intriguing and complex. Why not leave it as is?

coolparadiso's picture

the music nailed it from the start , that progression is great. excellent lyrics to the side !