Hold Me Down

Hold Me Down

LadyRed's picture



I'm restless
Without you here
I'm calmest
When you are near

My body aches
For the touch of yours
You are the one
My heart adores

So come to me
And hold me down
Let me rest
Safe and sound.

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metalfoot's picture

Nice structure to this one. The first verse is especially good, I think.

musicsongwriter's picture

Beautiful, poetic, loving feel here. Hope to hear your poem in a song.