He Rattled Off Number 33!

He Rattled Off Number 33!

Rockwrites75's picture




Liner Notes: 

Hey Everyone, here is song number 33 Jerry and I wrote. You did an excellent job on the lyrics bro Thanks, your friend Jimmy

Jerry here: I wanted to try something 3/4 time on this song and it turned out to be an easy project. I think I blew a word or two of the lyrics. Still, it came out pretty much what I wanted. Thanks Jimmy and thanks to everybody for listening.

Update: This demo has been updated to version 2, August 21, 2019.


He Rattled Off Number 33

He wrote it anxiously this week
He gave his lyrics a tweak
After all, he promised to have it tonight
He Rattled Off Number 33

At the end of this verse
He thinks it finally works
Much as he liked it, he needs something to eat
He Rattled Off Number 33

He had to stop for lunch
He had an idea and went on a hunch
Then he took his seat
He Rattled Off Number 33

The lyrics were posted
After he just started
He lifted the tablet and began to read
He Rattled Off Number 33

Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.


Rockwrites75's picture

Hey Jerry, my friend wow and many thanks bro. You did an excellent job on your new song I like it. Your guitar and the waltz sounds awesome.

Klaus's picture

I like this calm music. It fits the calm lyrics really well. Nice title and I like the way lyrics describe the act of writing. Jimmy, you wrote lyrics about writing lyrics! 3/4 time is something I should do more. It works for you, Jerry, and it's different. You need some variation so you don't get in a rut. Good collab you guys.

Ferry Colyer's picture

The jumpy guitar melodies work wonderfully in this waltz. I like the simple lyrics too and they made me smile being sung too.