When you are mine

When you are mine

glyne3's picture



Liner Notes: 

The irony


Devastating blue eyes
Pierce my soul
Looking right through me
Making me whole

What would life be
Without those eyes
What could love be
When you are mine

Warming red lips
Plump and stout
Judging me softly
Inside and out

Days disappear
In those lips divine
Love’s light appears
When you are mine

Comforting arms
Embrace me strong
Nothing in the world
Could ever be wrong

Every emotion
Stays lost in time
I’ll live forever
When you are mine

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3tdoan's picture

Classic romantic lyric. I like how the verses are paired, eyes, lips then the variation at the end. Solid rhymes.