Beautiful Being

Beautiful Being

LadyRed's picture



I need your body
In my bed
And your voice
In my head

You're my everything
And always have been
The most beautiful being
I've ever seen

So come to me
My dearest one
And lay with me
Until the sun.

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tamsnumber4's picture

So sensual and beautiful and don't we wish someone would love and want us this much....great write!

cts's picture

Very beautiful. Again, so many possibilities. I'm so interested with this one.

RalphCarl's picture

"Until the sun" is a really good line and so descriptive. very nice.