15

15

pokerowan's picture

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Hey now
Try another way
Hey now
What do you want to say

Think about
Ways you could embellish
How you think about
Your message

What do you want to say?
Have you taken in a breath?
Can you feel it in your brain?
Have you got the energy left?

Is it something you can feel?
Is it plain as day?
Take a moment, now, honey
What do you want to say?

Hey now
I know it’s hard to do
But everybody on Earth
Could be listening to you

Think about
Your prize
What lies in the light cast
By what you vocalise

What do you want to say?
Have you taken in a breath?
Can you feel it in your stance?
Have you got the energy left?

Is it something you can feel?
Is it plain as day?
Take a moment, now, honey
What do you want to say?

If everyone gets 15 minutes of fame
Are you really gonna waste it on your name?

What do you want to say?
Have you taken in a breath?
Can you feel it in your heart?
Have you got the energy left?

Is it something you can feel?
Is it plain as day?
Take a moment, now, honey
What do you want to say?



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Comments

This feels very much like a songwriters songwriting sing, but could definitely be taken other ways. It's just of course that is 50/90 and my brain is in full-on songwriter mode, so that where it went. Nice Melody. Lovely vocal.

phoenixash's picture

I love you whispery low register and as you rise in the range your voice becomes so lovely!