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Enjoyable listen I would have liked to have been able to read the lyrics, as they are my passion
Definitely not a shipwreck, it sails on and made me dance. Your voice is cool, not only that it's good, but it sounds cool, like you are a cool guy and it makes me wanna party at your party. Super cool!
Cool sound, might be easier to follow if you posted the lyrics on this page.
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Enjoyable listen
I would have liked to have been able to read the lyrics, as they are my passion 
Definitely not a shipwreck, it sails on and made me dance. Your voice is cool, not only that it's good, but it sounds cool, like you are a cool guy and it makes me wanna party at your party. Super cool!
Cool sound, might be easier to follow if you posted the lyrics on this page.