Empty Vessel

Empty Vessel

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Here's a cheesy little nugget for y'all. Written for the theme "Yin/Yang". Guideline: Start song with a bass line.

Lyrics: 

i’ve been an empty vessel
since your touch went away
and through this dark night
you filled my eyes with light
but your pain has ripped it away

you stop in my tracks
you drank my breath away

now i’m still trying to find
some balance in my mind

i’ve been an empty vessel
since your touch went away
and through this dark night
you filled my eyes with light
but your pain has ripped it away

there was a completion
between you and me
where all of our shadows
could sleep peacefully

i’ve been an empty vessel
since your touch went away
and through this dark night
you filled my eyes with light
but your pain has ripped it away



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Comments

3tdoan's picture

Not cheesy at all! I like the chordal variations in the "stop in my tracks" bit and the bassline start is quite effective. "your touch went away" is a nice image too.

billwhite51's picture

the bass line support of your opening chorus provides an intriguing lead in to the chordal opening up on the first verse.

Pam Grisham's picture

Intriguing beginning and then the feelings unfold beautifully.