LadyRed's picture



I lay before you
Covered in scars
But you look in my eyes
And only see the stars

You kiss every place
Where I have bled
Silencing the noise
Within my head

Your love is a blessing
That I'm grateful for
And I hope I live
To see what's in store.

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metalfoot's picture

This is very hopeful and pleasant (even that last couplet; with its dark insinuations, is still one with hope.)

AndyGetch's picture

Loving the parallel imagery with a slightly different angle Smile