The Last Coin In His Wallet!

The Last Coin In His Wallet!

Rockwrites75's picture

Liner Notes: 

Hey Everyone, this guy was broke that weekend. Thanks, your friend Jimmy


The Last Coin In His Wallet

It paid for his tab tonight
Money isn't meant to be in his lfe
It's for the three beers he bought
And the whiskey shots

The Last Coin In His Wallet
Was there just for a minute
The Last Coin In His Wallet
Then 30 seconds later he spent it

He staggered out of the bar
His weekend won't go to far
He sounds very broke
There's just water in his throat


It was here
He can't have another beer
It was here
The bartender made that clear

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jcollins's picture

lol...sounds like he spends all of his money in the bar every weekend. Bartender: No money no drinks! I'll gladly pay you Tuesday for a beer Good job on this!

Amanda West's picture

This is very descriptive and clearly portrays the character in a few words. That's the best way to do it I think Smile