Traffic Jam In His Head!

Traffic Jam In His Head!

Rockwrites75's picture
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Hey Everyone, here's a song about a guy running late for his dinner. Thanks, your friend Jimmy

Jerry here: I brought in my Ibanez guitar for the first time this year for a rocking demo. I still used my strat for lead guitar. I thought the vocals were pretty easy on this song. Total production time was close to 4 hours. This demo created on August 3, 2019. Thanks for listening.

Update: I did this late last night and listening to this song again this morning I can hear the cymbals are way too loud. I'm going to fix that but I'm not going to upload a new demo. Just a note and I'm ready to move on to the next song.

Lyrics: 

Traffic Jam In His Head

Traffic Jam In His Head
He's got tension in his neck
Traffic Jam In His Head
He doesn't know what to do next

He's not moving on the road
He is moving too slow
That's what she said
So he is starting to sweat

Chorus

Then after some time
He hung on to the horn tonight
Cus they had made dinner reservations
And he needed directions

Bridge
After what seemed like a long wait
He can keep going straight
But they tired and late
They are late and tired
Just a little late



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Comments

metalfoot's picture

The traffic jam in his head sounds intense! Poor fellow.

jcollins's picture

Wow, I can totally relate to this as I always have a traffic jam in my head. Great job on this!

Klaus's picture

This is excellent, Jimmy. Traffic jams are so stressful sometimes. Especially when it might ruin your dinner. And with wife there too. You've told all this very well.

3tdoan's picture

Funny how a traffic jam externally can create one in your head. Hung on the horn is a good line.

Rockwrites75's picture

Hey Jerry, my friend wow and many thanks bro. You did an excellent job on your new demo I like it. Your vocals and lead guitar solo sounds awesome.

Technicolor Gramophone's picture

Nice and crunchy guitar! Percussion on the nail. Hilarious lyrics! Solo at 2:19 rocks like a mofo, particularly around the three-minute mark. I'd hire you as my lead guitarist (if I had a band and/or money)!