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This is lovely work.
Hypnotic. Entrancing. I understand the urge to add vocals, but do think this has a stately beauty that is quite solid as-is.
great guitars on the bridge/chorus - this could go many ways - has a bit of jethro tull feel to me, yeah and a lot of others...
As much as I love drums, I like how subtle they are in this piece. They really pop in their simplicity.