My Heart's Gone Too
Post date:
07/04/2019 - 22:54
Demo:
Liner Notes:
Putting a melody, tempo, and dynamics to the lyrics and chords (like a lead sheet or fake book) by @metalfoot in the fake it challenge.
Lyrics:
at http://bythefont.com/alex/5090-2019/heart.pdf
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Comments
Nice work! I enjoyed what you did melodically here. You don't need to add me as a collaborator though.
great work , its got a nice reverbie thing going.
Well done, -- different sound for you (as far as I would know); again, good stuff.
nice play around with the vocals - nice melody - hauntingly good
Love the haunting tone of this....almost Doors-like.
I agree. The reverb multiplies the wistful vocal delivery and stark picking.
Dirty and gritty in all the right ways.
Really cool groove - guitar and vocals work well together.
Cool, huge sound, you're in a weird echoey space a bit, but an interesting one for sure. When you left you took me with you... interesting stuff here. Where have you gone? Where have I gone? More than a simple question.
I like the emphatic playing in the chorus, the contrast between it and the other sections is immediately palpable and interesting! Got that classic Andy dose of stereo echo and I really admire you for getting this done in one take!
Great job!! We ended up with similarities in melody. This was a fun challenge
Haunting. Thats the word that springs to mind here.... so much space!
Wow, you really evoked the lonely in the lyrics. The hot levels and reverb on the guitar add an ethereal fuzz to the accompaniment.