Frame for Flame

Frame for Flame

Liner Notes: 

Lyrics right now - working on music for it and will be posting a video of it as well as a video of my process for writing it on my youtube channel soon.

I took the title from Titular and then got a word cloud based on the word Flame. I used all the words from the word cloud in the writing of the song.

Lyrics: 

Frame for Flames

V.1
Baby, who do I blame
Staring at the blue sky
I need someone to frame
You were a butterfly
When I call, you came
I need someone to frame

Baby, my desire for you
Exhumes old memories
I need someone to frame
Fickle in your fire
I find you where you are
I let you burn me up in your flame

Chorus
I need someone to frame
When nothing else remains
When I cant take the blame
When nothing is the same
I’m burning in the flame
I need someone to frame

V.2
Baby, what once flickered
Flickers in me
I need someone to frame
Baby, the ghost of love and hate
And of sad heartbreak
I need someone to frame

Baby, fire and ice
Listed once or twice
I need someone to frame
Baby, in the lite
Self made men from strife
Tested, tried and true in the flame

Chorus
I need someone to frame
When nothing else remains
When when I cant take the blame
When nothing is the same
I’m burning in the flame
I need someone to frame

Bridge
The fire consumes me in slow motion
Turns me to a permanent shade of coal
Ready, Set and go with the confusion
The only thing not taken was my soul
And the warm wind that blows

Chorus
I need someone to frame
When nothing else remains
When when I cant take the blame
When nothing is the same
I’m burning in the flame
I need someone to frame



Please keep your comments respectful, honest, and constructive. Please focus on the song and not the demo.

Comments

Klaus's picture

Passionate, urgent and almost compulsive lyrics with good rhythms. I really like the lines in the bridge: "The fire consumes me in slow motion / Turns me to a permanent shade of coal". Great start. Lemme know when the demo is up.

kahlo2013's picture

Agree with Klaus, their is a passionate urgency as well as intimate power the erupts from these beautifully crafted lyrics. The emotion is palpable!

coolparadiso's picture

powerful and passionate, has a rhythm of words! be interested to see what you do with it!

DeannaSweidel's picture

I cannot wait to hear this to music! Girl...that chorus is amazing!

3tdoan's picture

Amazing momentum in this lyric, driven by those AAAAAA rhymes in the chorus. Fickle in your fire is a great use of alliteration.